12)+Quantaysha+Glover

Good start Quantaysha. I'm excited to hear your story.

(Keshia Cole!!!!!!) Keshia Cole was born on October 15,1981 in Oakland Califonia she is also an American recording artist.

She released her platium selling dubet album %Just like you% in September 2007.In 2006 Cole dated rapper Young Jezzey.Their relationship ened after a denide proposel however there has been conflicting report about who actually proposed.In March 2009 Cole egin dating Daniel Gibson of the NBA Cleveland Cavaliers.

Later became engaged to him on Febuary4,2010 the pregnant Cole was hospitalized for pregautionary reasons.On March1,2010 Cole was admited into the hospital with labor pains.One of Keisha's cloest friends R&B singer Monica comfremed the labor situation via her twitter page.She gave birth on March2,2010 to her first baby boy (Daniel hiram gibson Jr).

Keisha Cole has involeced people by making a reality a reality show called the way it is an the show was about her life.An by that i mean it was about how her mom was in a center it looked lyk jail by it wasn't then her mom got out of jail anshe let her mom move in wyth her an she got in touch of her sister neffee an she helped her mom get on her feet an by that i mean she brought her mom a condo an gave her mom a make over an she was adopted causw when she was younger her mom was on drugs.

She couldn't take care of her so she gave her to sombody that she knew will her best friend an on the show keshia calls them both her mom an her real mom thinks that that keshia is treatn her like shws not even her mother an keshia,her sister,an her mother all took therapy to make the faimilly better an let all the anger that they had inside them they let it all out so that they can start off fresh as a happy faimily.Ithink she involenced people by themwatching her show they can see if your mom is or was on drugs dont mis treat her try to help her or if she isn't forgive her an start fresh dont hold it over her head..........an let her know how you fill dont be mad at her just let her know.and she really did involence people by her show least at thats what i think!!!!!!!

Assignment 8: It was the Forth of July and we were all getting ready lookn all nice and then i went into my moms room and she was looking out the window mad so i said mom wats wrong she sad come look when i went to go look out the window my whole day came crashing down.It was like i was really sick an coulldn't get out the bed thats how bad it was

It was pouring down raining an we where going to go to kennywood with the faimilly,but then we couldn't because it was storming not raining but storming.So my mom called my gmom an they where talking about how it was raining an how my lil brothers where mad because they wanted to go to kennywood.Then my mom sad foget this im not going to spend my Forth of July in the house. Did this give you hope that the day would get better or was this the worst news you could hear? How did you feel?

So then my mom called my gmom an she said mom in not spending my Forth of July in the house.My gmom sad nobody is its ganna stop raining by two my mom said i dont care an somtimes they be wrong they said today was going to be a nice day but look at it now mom my gmom said yea thats true and if they dont go today they'll go tomorow.My mom sad O NO im going to Erie to the amusment park my gmom said you go rite ahead when you get there we'll be in kennywoood with dennis,dameir,an jaquan my mom said ok.

After that we my mom said come on yall lets go we are going to Erie so ten my bother an i got are shoes on an then we all walked down the steps an on to the pourch then into the truck it was me,my mom,an my older bother,my moms boyfriend,an my moms hair dresser.We all where wondering why we where gong to Erie.So then i said to my mom Are nany an grandad an noopie an them coming she said no nany said shes ganna stay here an go to kennywood then i said but its raining at that time it had slowed down then my mom said nany said the news said it's ganna stop raining im not going to be waiting around for it to stop raining an it might not stop so we going to Erie to the amusment park.Do you want to stay here with your nany? i said no.She said ok lets go. I like your writing here. What were you thinking when she was leaving for erie?

Then my mom start driving and so we git to the park way an we stop to use the restrooms an get some thing to drink then we start driving again then everyone strated to fall the sleep then my mom pulled over an her boyfriend strated to drive

Good, Keep writing.

Assignment 6: It was a rainy day in pittsburgh there where deep a HUGE puddles every where,and rain was falling down really really hard an people had to pull over because the rain was so hard

Great job Quantaysha. You are a really good writer, you just have to work on getting to school all the time and working as hard as you can in your classes. You will be successful. Good work on this, try to make up some of your old assignments (1-3).

To start off,I think we should have a movie theater in Wilkinsburgh.Wilkinsburgh needs a place where kids can go so they can be occupide.It will help kids stay out of trouble,it will also help people save ther gas.And last but not least it might stop some of the negitive things that happen in Wilkinsburgh.

A movie theater would keep kids occupied,because some kids just stay in the house because they have nuthing to do with their time.So since they dont have nuthing else to do,some kids go outside an just walk around with nuthing to do,or their call their friends an they might be doing somthing an dont want that person to go with them so they will say O i can't come out side because im on punishment,or Im not allond outside beacause my moms not home an i have to watch my lil brothers an sister.So then that person is all board just walkn around with nuthing to do.But if we have a theater they will not have to worrie about being board.They can just get a lil money a go to the movie theater to occupie ther time.

A movie theater would help keep kids out of trouble/ avoid neg. things.The reason i say that is because there be a lot of negitive things going on in Wilkinsburgh.It happen because kids or teenagers be board and have nuthing to do so they will pick on kids.By pick i mean,say for insince a boy is walkn past and there is a big group of teenagers standing around board.So they see the him walking past so they just decide to say hey lil ugly dudean the boy might gat anger prombles so they decide to follow him an say stuff to him an he could have a weapon on him an he might get REALLY REALLY MAD then all of a sudden hes pulln a weapon out on the teenagers!!!! then one of them in up in the hospital hurt real bad.But if we had a movie theater in Wilkinsburgh the teenagers would of been board they would probly be on their way to go see a movie,instead of the hospital hurt.

A movie theater would save us some gas money!!!!!! The reason i think a movie theater in Wilkinsburgh would save gas. Some people dont have jobs,an some people are laid off. So they moght want to go to the movies an they have to ride all the way to Homestead or Water Works an their low on gas.They drive out to one of them an when they come out from seeing the movie their car will not start BOOM NO GAS!!!!! Then they have to find a way to get home because they are stuck an dint have a car to drive home.So that is why i say we should have a movie theater in Wilkinsburgh.Because if we have one here then they can just walk to the movie theater,an save gas an dont have to worry about going out side an their car will not start.

That is why we should have a movie theater in Wilinsburgh it will stop the crimes it will save gas it will also occupie kids time.So maybe a movie theater in Wilkinsburgh will help get Wilkinsburgh together.

Good start Quantaysha, Keep working hard. You are a really good student when you work hard.