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=my favorite day of 7th grade was when the students got to play the teachers in basketball.the mornig was fun cause the first period teacher mr. boll was playing and he is always hyper but this day he was even more hyper and he was jumping over tables. and then i was in sixth period with mr. cupps and he was talking smack and i was talking smack back and i told him i was going to dunk in the game and that i was going to dunk in him. even though we lost it was still fun.= = = = = = = =i think progress is good because.= =﻿when you have a school project you can get on a computer and find info about anything. and then you can get stuff off the computers way faster than looking in a book. cuse when you have to do a reaserch on a person you can get on google and they give you alot of information about the person.=

=and you can talk to your friend from facbook or on any other sites and you don`t have to be right next the person. that is good cuse if you was in the war or somthing you could get on facebook and talk to your wife and kids and your family and friends. And if you had a camera on your computer you could have a business meeting at your job with a person across the world.= =thats why i think progress good.= = = = = = = = = = = = = =1) my smart house has a voice door activated soon as you walk in my living room on the right there is a go kart and i have a bar table. and i have a swiming pool.= =and right next to my pool i got a basketbal court and a 100 inch tv that is voice commanding and to frigerator and a freezer that is voice commandet and a pool table= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =BOB MARLEY birth name is robert nesta marley. bob marley was the third worlds first pop super star. he was the person that introduced the world to mystic power of reggae. he liked singing about his cultre. bob marley was apart of the rastafri movement and they was the key elment of reggae music.= =he was insparational becuse people liked his poetic song and his strong belife in freedom of the right to be closer to god and the right to live freely and happily.= = Good Dom. I like where you are headed with this story. Is it about the party or learning to play basketball? Maybe, if it is about basketball, you could start with a description of the small fisher price hoop. Then, follow with your excitement about the new toy. = =5) for my birthday when i was 4 years old i got a fisher price basketball hoop at my house and me and my mom had to put it to geather and then my mom made food and then most of my cousins and that made me happy cuse i liked hangingn with them cuse they always make me laugh.then we was shooting around on my new hoop and my one cousin is good at basketball and he always teaches me new moves to get to the rack and how to get my handeling better.=

=and i always had my hoop on the highest level so i could practice on my shot and i can practice on my jumping and that made it easiear to play with my cousin on reagular sized hoops. my hoop was white and the backboard is white to and there was a red square on the backboard. and i would take it outside so the rest of my friends could play with me one on one. and i would play with my mom,dad,and my uncleand they would always flick my wrist and put and arch on my shot so it is a better chance of making the shot.=

Good job here Dom. Keep going. Who helped you learn to flick your wrist and put arch on your shot. Did it ever get hard to play on a regular-sized hoop because you were used to playing too much on the small hoop? How did this help you become the basketball player you are today? Do you still like the game of basketball. DO you still play on a little hoop at your house? Where do you play now?

= Good job Dom. Keep working hard in class. Your paper on D-rose is well organized. = =4) they think that lebron is the best player in the NBA becuse of his powreful dunks and his explosiveness when there down and bring them back in the game. OR they say kobe bryant becuse his late game shots or how consteinly he can make any shot he shoots.but i think Derrick rose is the best in the NBA becuse he knows how to set his teammates up to score and and he is a good rebounder and he has great deffense.= =the way Derrick rose sets his teammates up to score is how he drives and then he dishes out to the open person in coner or the person down low for the shoot. and he is good at penatrating and making the deffender come out on him. so he can make plays for his team and his teammates can make play when he passes the ball.= =Derrick rose is a great rebounder the way he is a great rebounder is he has more reboundes than most of the point guards and the shooting guards on the team. and he gets over power forward and centers or most people that go up for the ball. in his career he had 927 rebounds total. he had 239 offensive rebounds and 688 deffensive rebounds.=

=Derrick rose is one of the best deffenders in the NBA. in his career he has 94 blocks and he has 204 steals in his career. he is good at chasing down players too block the shoot and he can steal the ball off some of the best NBA ball handlers and he blocks most of the best shooters and dunkers.= =﻿thats why Derrick rose is the best NBA basketball player in the league.=

Good work Dom. Keep working hard and you should be able to finish this today. Your paper is well-organized. =﻿= =3)basketball is a somtimes a hard sport to play. shooting is a good way to become better first you can start with some drills to get better with consistency and accuracy.=

=2) the class room's in wilkinsburg .they have white walls and brown floors and most of the room's have tv in the room. and they all have chalk boards, they all have windows,with doors they can put their stuff in, and all of the class have some kind of poster on there wall and desks.=

=1) i would pick lil wayne to be a motivatinal speaker at wms. becase everybody can relate to him and people like his music. and he is real smart and he is good with figurtive language in his songs. he say i landed on the sky. i fell from the street. and he cuould show if you learn figurtive language you could be a raper or a singer. OR anything you want to be in your life.=

=﻿THATS WHY I WOULD PICK LIL WAYNE TO BE A MOTIVATINAL SPEAKER AT WMS. = = Good work D-Aime,﻿ = = ﻿this is a good start. Why do you think that everyone could relate to him. You could add this to strengthen your explanation. Why would understanding figurative language help you as a rapper or poet? You could add these to strengthen your paragraph. 3hbh =