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micheal jackson

The reason i picked him is because he donated money to the poor like hati and orphans and he provided food for them and cloths even though people put him down he still stood up and kept his carrear going on like hey said he was gay and they proved he wasnt they said that he bleached him self but he had a skin deasie but through that he never gave up but now he is dead he is still a ledgen

Good start Thomas, You can break this into sentences. As of now, you have all one sentence here. Talk to me about where to do this. I agree with you that these are all reasons that Michael could speak to WMS students. However, I want you to explain why these things would be motivational to students. He might be a good person, but does that make students better people? Good start, Now help your reader to see that connection.

Big girls dont care about calories The reason i picked this topic is because they eat whatever they want like eating at fast food places like Bugerkings and Mcdonalds and they eat more than what they are sobose to. They dont like to exersice after theyeat a big meal but boy is differnt because they gain weight so they can build muscule but girls just do it to do it. Here, you could add a thesis statement to clarify where your paper is going. It could be, "Girls face more weight issues than boys and it can hurt their self-esteem, so they should excercize and believe in themselves.

The reason some girls get fat is because they get depressed, so they wont fill empty and lost and out of place.So they eat eat eat eat entel they get teased and they cry and have a lot of challenges like fitten it and having friends back they up when there are getting miss treated so they try to ask for help but people wont help so they get mad and say forget it and eat eat eat but some girls try to lkill themselves.

What are ways that students (in this case girls) can be more healthy?

Some girls try to lose weigh but it to hard to lose all that weight so they give up.But some dont they keep going and beat the challenge but being fat dont mean your un healhty it just mean you like food but some ways you can be more healtyis they can exercise and eat only 2 meals a day and try to jog to weork it stead of catching a bus this is what girls can do to be more healthy\

Why is it important that all people keep a positive self-image (believe in themselves) regardless of what their weight is? Explain that here.

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Good start here Thomas. I would just talk about waking up and being excited in your first paragraph. You don't even have to say why. Just explain how you felt and how excited you were. In the next paragraph: Add why you were excited and what you wanted for your birthday. Explain why you wanted those things and weather you though you would get them. You have some good stuff here.

Today was the day i was eager to get up but i could not go to sleep today was the day i turn 11111111111111133333333333333333333333 arnt you so happy for me for my bd i want a xbox playstation and a dirt bike but it was just a simple day i ate got ready fore nothing but it was kinda fun but not as exciting as i thought but it was on wendsday so i cant stay up all night because i had schoolbut the weird thing is i didnt go.

but on friday i went to davids busters with my dad and cousin and it was fun we playedthis zom bie game then a war game then weplayed a dinosaurgame and won 9001 tickets we bought a bluetooth for my cousins playstation that i play ever day then we left and he went home then me then my dad left and i went to sleep and had a wonderful day This is a good story. However, we need more description of your time at Dave and Buster's. Describe the setting: the lights, the games, and others things about the setting. How did you feel when you were there? WHat games were you playing? Did you win any tickets? This could be a lot more writing, but I want you to spend some time here describing your day.

The next day it was ok i was older but i liked it when i was 12 it was all simble and easy and now im 1111111111113333333333333333333333 i have more reasponsibilitys like taking care of my lil brothers and sisters and getting my ow﻿n ﻿﻿food and get my own clothes. 1 month later it is my brothers birthday and we are going to the mall or david&busters but even th it was a normal day both birth day andthey were the best 2 days of are lives

In three weeks it will be my sisters birthday and we are staying at a hotel and we are going to have fun but intell this day i am going to chill and not get t ﻿ rouble

My personal narrative is on Thomas,Jefferson Thomas was the 3rd president,he was president for 8 years. He was born 4/13/1743 shadwell st. A few years later his dad died he inheritad money,and slaves but before he became president he fought in war .after the war he wrote the declartion of independent.

Thomas help lewis and clark expedition.He was the most popular president because he is in history he helped people like gave people money to live good well at least enough to get them through the week .the british hated him so much they captured him and eventually he broke outand got back home they tryed to do it again but they failed.

Thomas lived in the white house july4,1826 thomas died and he was died in the white house that is my narrative of Thomas Jefferson.

Good start here Thomas. This is not a narrative, but an informational piece. I think you could add some paragraphs on Jefferson's role in the declaration of independence.

===When you comes in my magical house you see 9 wonderful ponds with china gold fish with robot chips in them so they canm do what ever i want then to the right you see my garage with 2 cars that are fast like a rocket then if you leave the room you can go straight and you will see my bouncy bastetball court hen if you leave out of this room if you keep going down the hall there is my safe room that is protected by a lion,snake and a robot .=== ===Now we are getting to the good part to txhe right of the theater i have a phone store with boost,at&t,sprint then down the hall way is my master bed room with a trampoline bed and a 200 in touch screen tv and next to my bed there is a safe tv then a room over is my kitchenwith a self make stove that you type in anything you want this is my great house of thomas pease.===

=Progress is good make life easier like instead of reading we can get the computer to read it tous.= =0ne reason progress is good is because it saves more time by saving time getting on the internet it can save yo way more time and you can copy and paste ni stead of writing it out and you can just put it on your page and that is making it way faster.= ==Another way progress is good because it can make you smarter by looking up important stuff like how to write,read and do math and you can play educational games and get other learning materials like books,paper and a folder or somethimg just stuff you can order online.==